For the past 13 years, accomplished author and Adelphi alumna Alice Hoffman '73 has led a retreat to help young writers find their potential.
Professor Robert Linne, Ph.D. addresses students of the Alice Hoffman Young Writers Retreat
by Kurt Gottschalk
From all appearances, it may not have been too different from the typical high school English class: three dozen students seated in a circle, discussing such literary devices as assonance and internal rhyme. Except for this session鈥攈eld in a meeting room at Adelphi鈥檚 Ruth S. Harley University Center鈥攕tudents were analyzing lyrics to the Broadway smash Hamilton a day after a session spent workshopping with best-selling novelist at the writers retreat that bears her name.
Hoffman had students suggest opening lines for stories and then choose one to write as a group. The students also got advance copies of , Hoffman鈥檚 novel slated for release in November, and at least a few of them鈥攁ccording to Professor Robert Linne, Ph.D., who co-leads the intensive鈥攆inished it overnight.
Adjunct Professor Ellen Hagan engaging with students
鈥淎lice Hoffman is amazing,鈥� said Adjunct Professor Ellen Hagan, who has been leading the Alice Hoffman Young Writers Retreat with Dr. Linne since the retreat鈥檚 inception 13 years ago. 鈥淪he gave sort of an artist鈥檚 talk鈥攈ow she started writing. A lot of kids had questions about how she got started, what her life is like.鈥�
It鈥檚 a rare occasion for young writers who sometimes have more interest than they do opportunity, according to Dr. Linne.
鈥淥ften there鈥檚 a lot of testing going on in the schools, so a lot of arts and creative writing gets pushed to the side,鈥� Dr. Linne said. 鈥淭his is a chance for students to work on their writing and get together with other young people and talk about writing and books.鈥�
The predominantly female group of aspiring scribes also got to work with Brett Clark ’10, M.A. ’11, an English education alum and teacher at Thomas A. Edison Career and Technical Education High School in Queens, who led them in a . With such lines as 鈥淵ou and your words flooded my senses/Your sentences left me defenseless/You built my palaces out of paragraphs鈥� projected onto a screen, Clark led them through the use and impact of the words.
Isaac Rivera (second from left) and fellow scribes workshopping
鈥淵ou have four sentences and he鈥檚 packed so much into those sentences,鈥� she said. 鈥淵ou can see how the language is really important, because he thinks about the words he uses, not just what they mean but the sound.鈥�
Dr. Linne carried the topic further, discussing some of the subtler points of using rhyme and pointing out that it鈥檚 fallen from favor in the poetry world but has found a resurgence in rap music鈥攏ot just in paired couplets, he pointed out, but in such devices as internal rhyme.
鈥淭hat鈥檚 been a big part of hip-hop,鈥� he said. 鈥淩akim and Eminem are famous for doing it a lot.鈥�
Students were then assigned to write a short scene with one of the historical figures they were asked to research, including Susan B. Anthony, Rachel Carson and Harriet Tubman. Dr. Linne suggested they try to tie their dialogue in with current events鈥攍ike Tubman being slated to appear on the new $20 bill. Students were quick to react, noting that U.S. president and slave owner Andrew Jackson would still be on the other side.
鈥淲hich is basically like putting Anne Frank on one side of a coin and Hitler on the other,鈥� pronounced Molly Donelan, who will start her junior year at Mineola High School in the fall.
Brett Clark ’10, M.A. ’11 teaches literary techniques using lyrics from Hamilton
Donelan鈥攚hose long red hair complements a fiery spirit鈥攚as among the students who read 鈥渞ant poems.鈥� Hers was about the political differences she feels with her family and people at school.
Isaac Rivera, who is about to start his senior year at Coney Island Prep High School in Brooklyn, traveled two hours twice a day to get to the five-day institute. Decked out in baggy jeans, his long black curls falling out from under a stylish bucket hat, he looked the part of the inspirations he claimed: rappers MF Doom, Aesop Rock and Kendrick Lamar.
鈥淚 first started independently writing when I was 11,鈥� he said. 鈥淚 started listening to more hip-hop music and listening to what they were saying. But this is my first real experience in actually having to get up and say something. This retreat has exploded my entire brain with concepts and ideas.鈥�